Rough Drafts of Literacy Narratives due today! Email me a copy if you do not come to class for the points.
What should you title your essay? What would be a good title that makes your reader want to read the essay and prepares them for it.
Before we peer review, I want you to take a look at your own draft.
- Add dialogue, find a spot to add in some dialogue.
- Add details of a character or an artifact in your narrative. What can you describe or add details too? Are you giving enough context so the reader follows along?
- Add an image to help tell the story. What image would help the reader? What image is related to your literacy?
Peer edit the same way you revise your own work.
Be specific in identifying problems or opportunities.
Offer suggestions for improvement.
Praise what is genuinely good in the paper.
Comment below with your plan of action for revising your draft. Be specific, give some details!